THE LEGEND OF POU AND JAXON.
A LONG, LONG. LONG TIME AGO THERE WERE TWO BOYS. ONE OF THEM WAS NAMED POU AND THE OTHER ONE WAS CALLED JAXON THEY LIVED ON A BEACH AND FOUGHT FOR A BIG PIECE OF LAND. SO THE FIRST ONE, POU, ALMOST KILLED THE OTHER ONE- JAXON, WHEN HE THREW HIM OFF THE CLIFF. SO HE THOUGHT JAXON WAS DEAD AND WENT TO THE LAND AND CLAIMED THE LAND .IT WAS A VERY BEAUTIFUL BEACH BECAUSE IT HAD CRYSTAL CLEAR
WATER.
AND WHITE SHINY SAND
BUT JAXON HAD SURVIVED THE FALL AND CHALLENGED HIM TO A COMPETITION. THE WINNER WOULD CALL THE BEACH HIS.
SO POU AND JAXON STARTED FIGHTING. SO JAXON PUSHED POU OFF THE VOLCANO SO JAXON FINALLY GOT PAY BACK. HE WENT BACK TO THE ISLAND AND CLAIMED IT .
THE END.
BY AHI
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